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Not Exactly Ana's avatar

Your writing style is so beautiful..🤍

Sara Kay's avatar

This is so sweet! Thank you Ana!! ✨

HEW(Hue) of Poetry's avatar

The optimism of young love. So earnest. I recall a quote from a novel "Boy Toy" which had the main character muse in his internal dialogue that being young is the proper time to fall in love because you can devote yourself to it. Nothing else takes up space in your mind and heart because it's truly all encompassing.

Sara Kay's avatar

Oh my goodness. Adding that to my TBR now

Paul R. Pace's avatar

Dang, this is beautifully written.

Sara Kay's avatar

Thank you for reading!!!

Shane Hardwick's avatar

Awesome poem !!! .. I can feel your lament ….💞